We kill angels

Hey there, not a great writer of critiques so bear with me. I'll probably babble on about some good points first before going into that dark area of negativity or as I call "annoying nitpicking" (which you are free to ignore at your leisure).

First of. What a great poem. I get from this is a feeling of dependence. That somehow this dependence works both ways. I may be wrong, so please excuse my rashness.

"We take the kindness for granted"... The line that caused me to think of dependence upon the angel's "kindness".

"...over the angel we broke..." this quote is a line I think helped me see that the angel is also dependent on the narrator.

The repetition of "fall" is a great technique, but perhaps you may consider trying out a couple of other words to make the poem impact more. Find a few words that are startling. Yet it's all up to you the writer at the end of the day.

Also I found that the poem overall didn't flow as well as it should have. I had to re-read lines at certain points as the syntax was a bit forced in my view.

Your last stanza is a much more darker affair than the previous two. Creatures associated with darkness, such as "leeches", "vampires" are used. And these are terms applied to mortal beings not those "angels", who we "take for granted" as though our dependence on them is enough to hurt or even kill them.

Overall I enjoyed the poem and I understood (if I'm correct) most of what you were trying relay to your audience. Again I could be wrong.

Keep up the great writing and please be assured I mean no disrespect in this critique if it comes across that way.