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Like a sister I do love you
The sister who never was mine
Older sister I look up to
My younger sister fair and fine
And you're more than a friend to me
My twin sister with diff'rent blood
We're seperated by the sea
But to you my heart does still spud

Sometimes I curse all of the miles
You and me thousands do divide
I want to witness all your smiles
Those which are born from deep inside
I cannot hold you when you cry
And I really wish that I could
Still a dreamer's mind does fly
And it'll be with you for good

And it brought this few lines to you
Written from deep within the heart
And each single word here is true
A wish from somewhere far apart
To my sister so far away:
I wish you a happy birthday
My birthday gift for :icondarlingangel0565: :happybounce::squee:
I hope you like it, Sis :heart:

I wrote it with the melody of "Colorblind" by "The Dresden Dolls" stuck in my head. Though I am not sure if you can actually sing this poem to this song ^^;
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:iconivylis:
Ivylis Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a beautiful gift ! :heart:
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Diluculi Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :love:
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:iconthewitchofgrich:
how beautiful!!!!!! :D :D :D :D
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Diluculi Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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:iconsutsuki-sensei:
This is beautiful Riddle, and an amazing gift for Angel. ^-^
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:icondiluculi:
Diluculi Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :D
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Lunacella Oct 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Lovely and well done! :iconrubcheeksplz:
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Diluculi Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much ^^
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:iconsvitavotara:
Very nice :) I love it too. Happy Birthday to your sister!
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Diluculi Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ^^
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