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Wipe away all of the dirt and blood
With the back of your hand
From your mouth, wipe down the mud
Say, can you get up? Say, can you stand?
Take my hand, I uphold you anytime
The fight was tough
The beating was rough
But here we are, still alive, how sublime

Now, let's see how bad it really is
We have seen better days
There is no doubt about this.
Despite some bruises and scars we'll raise
Yet again, maybe we will never learn
When to give in
When we cannot win
But here we are, and defeat we still spurn

So take my hand, get back on your feet
You didn't die of the pains
Even broken hearts still beat
And pump the red hot blood through our veins
As long as we live it's not over yet
We will go on
Even if we're wrong
Here we are, running down the road ahead
:icondiluculi:
I think this poem is strong enough to stand for it's own.

It's dedicated to all of my friends trying to overcome their struggles with life.
I know you are strong/stubborn enough to make it!

Inspired by the first two lines of Flogging Molly's "Paddy's Lament":
Wipe the blood from your lip with the flesh of your hand.
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~blubbityblub Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a beautiful piece of work. Astoundingly inspiring, well written, forceful yet gentle at the same time, something i would imagine a rough father would console his son with, or something like that. Very very beautiful. Be proud of this :)
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*Diluculi Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much :)
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Mood: Joy =Radiant-Intention Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
As I have come to expect, wonderfully done! :D
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*Diluculi Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :D
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Mood: Joy =Radiant-Intention Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are most welcome. Keep up the nice work! :D
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*Diluculi Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I try my best ^^
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Mood: Joy =Radiant-Intention Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are doing a wonderful job. Again, much like a stubborn survival. :D (Not giving up!)
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it said to me not to give up. love the message.
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*Diluculi Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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you're very welcome!
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