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When hate is a fire, then it's burning cold.
All consuming, raging uncontrolled.
Hot tears are burning in eyes and on skin,
Unable to calm the storm within.

The consumptive flame turns from red to white.
Burns down borders between wrong and right,
Disoriented reason leads astray.
Lined with ash and debris is the way.

Beneath the heat of raging fire is ice,
For firstly the cold did heat entice.
When freezing the heart in its icy grip.
The shell won't melt, won't break or rip.
:iconglory-be-project:

General thoughts about the subject of hate.
This is not aimed at anybody! I listened to this while writing: Janus - Die letzte Tür.
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:icontuiskulumi:
tuiskulumi Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
This is an awesome poem. I just read it, and couldn't help to be brought in! Keep up the good work :D
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:icondiluculi:
Diluculi Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :D
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:icontuiskulumi:
tuiskulumi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Keep up the good work! :D
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helenyimra Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
i love i even thinking of translate it to hebrew'are you agree?
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:icondiluculi:
Diluculi Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
If can translate it, go on :)
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Feanor-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Shivers up and down my spine! Simply masterful!
It is almost difficult to describe just why this is so great. The words flow smoothly and convey the feeling strongly, and the contrast of ideas is striking, especially in how you have made those contrasting words have the same meaning.
(did that make any sense? ^^; )
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:icondiluculi:
Diluculi Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much!
(yes you did :))
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:icontommyboywood:
tommyboywood Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
nice analogy - fiery hate stems from a cold heart - how true!
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:icondiluculi:
Diluculi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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isahrishs Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Simple, short yet says everything!
nicely written!! :thumbsup:
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